BlueIris
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Wed Jul-15-09 08:12 AM
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The BlueIris Semi-Nightly Poetry Break, 7/15/09 |
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"The Colt"
I was born For somewhere else It's in the bond Of my bones My mother spoke it On a night with lightening
I think of it now As I waste my time In a tilting haze And try to mean something
Come morning I go I change clothes And imagine The dance continues And the mirror Is mine
~Brian Ingram
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Tuesday Afternoon
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Wed Jul-15-09 08:39 AM
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1. this one takes a turn.... |
BlueIris
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Wed Jul-15-09 08:42 AM
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2. Agreed. And it is so simple and unexpected. nt |
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Wed Jul-15-09 10:45 AM
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Beautiful...
I love this imagery...
Thank you!
:hi:
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BlueIris
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Wed Jul-15-09 10:54 AM
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4. Sometimes shorter really IS better. nt |
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