backtoblue
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Thu Jul-16-09 10:31 AM
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To all of my lounge friends. |
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Edited on Thu Jul-16-09 11:15 AM by backtoblue
Here in the Lounge is a colorful group We laugh, we cry, we announce when we poop We are inappropriate, unruly, and admit we are lazy We blame GD when our posts get too crazy
Our conversations are blunt and substance is blurry We post pictures of all things cute and furry Our minds are open to all sorts of threads We're not afraid to admit to voices in our heads
A Lounge full of democrats with a chance to unwind When we need to vent aloud, no one here seems to mind So here is my point, reaching out to each friend What is the correct ratio of vodka/O.J. to blend?
edited to end on a lighter note.
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Bertha Venation
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Thu Jul-16-09 10:52 AM
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1. I like the first two stanzas and the first two lines of the third |
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Thu Jul-16-09 10:55 AM
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2. Thanks, just thought I'd add a little politics at the end for the lounge! |
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I was beginning to think that I didn't have any friends here anymore! :hi:
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Bertha Venation
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Thu Jul-16-09 11:16 AM
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4. and what would the lounge be without a little politics? |
Tuesday Afternoon
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Thu Jul-16-09 10:55 AM
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3. who needs the pressure? I am here to unwind...cute poem though |
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Thu Jul-16-09 11:17 AM
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6. I changed the last two lines to keep the air light. |
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I missed most of the drama the past few weeks, so I will behave myself! I guess some things are better off unknown. Hope you have a good day! :hi:
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Thu Jul-16-09 11:21 AM
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8. NOW! That is what I call a perfect Lounge poem!! Nice and light and with a |
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Edited on Thu Jul-16-09 11:22 AM by Tuesday Afternoon
drink at the end :toast:
edited for typos
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Thu Jul-16-09 11:17 AM
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5. Very cute! I would recommend it if I could! |
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Thank you, backtoblue. :hug:
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backtoblue
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Thu Jul-16-09 11:19 AM
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7. Oh, the irony!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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That is exactly what the last two lines were, but I changed them to make it less "political"!
:rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
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