CaliforniaPeggy
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Wed Sep-16-09 12:54 AM
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"The Ways of Love" Tonight's open mic...now with audio... |
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The touch of your hand The look in your eyes The way you speak to me
They say I love you
And they make me love you More
It’s not as though I didn’t For I do
It reinforces the bond We have We two
So special to me The love you bear So tender the words They float in the air Over my head
They surround my heart They hold me close In the tender way You do
The bond is so strong It survives all the blows Time delivers It will withstand the hurt Life brings
We have woven it Together Not even death hurts Us
All your ways Tell me So much love is Here
© MLChttp://www.fileden.com/files/2009/9/14/2574424/My%20Documents/MP3-The%20ways%20of%20love.mp3
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Wed Sep-16-09 02:43 AM
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1. My dear CaliforniaPeggy! |
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It is nice to hear and see your words tonight!
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CaliforniaPeggy
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Wed Sep-16-09 11:02 AM
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I am so glad you came by to see and hear my words tonight, sweetie...
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Wed Sep-16-09 03:12 PM
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3. Made me sad (for my own reasons). |
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Edited on Wed Sep-16-09 03:12 PM by ihavenobias
But well written (and spoken)!
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CaliforniaPeggy
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Wed Sep-16-09 03:20 PM
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4. My dear ihavenobias... |
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Ah, sweetie...
I'm sorry it makes you sad...
May those conditions change...
I'm really honored that you like how I wrote it and spoke it!
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Wed Sep-16-09 06:49 PM
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Wed Sep-16-09 07:18 PM
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6. Beautiful! I love it Peggy!!!! |
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:pals: It was great to speak to you again....luv ya, sweetie!!!
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Wed Sep-16-09 07:46 PM
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Ah, so good to hear your voice!
And I'm honored that you love my recording and poem...
Take care, OK?
Luv ya too!
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Wed Sep-16-09 07:49 PM
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8. It was great talking to you, too Peggy! You really have a knack for this stuff.. |
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Wed Sep-16-09 07:51 PM
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I couldnt get the last one to work, but this one did.
I liked hearing it better than my reading it. I get to hear how it is supposed to sound.
:applause: :applause: :applause:
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Wed Sep-16-09 07:54 PM
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I'm sorry the last one didn't work for you...
And yes, poetry is meant to be heard...
When you hear it, you hear the meaning much more clearly than when you just read it...
The words come alive when they're spoken!
Thank you sweetie!
If you want, PM me your email, and I'll send you the original link of the MP3 so you can hear it...
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Wed Sep-16-09 08:04 PM
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11. Yes, it sounded much better coming from you |
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than the way it sounded in my head.
When I was in school I always competed in the UIL prose interpretation, and my teachers always wanted me to try poetry, but I wouldn't. I am just not good at it.
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Wed Sep-16-09 08:09 PM
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Listening, I could catch the cadence more clearly...Hearing it in the authors voice brought a lump to my throat... Lovely.
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Wed Sep-16-09 08:11 PM
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Edited on Wed Sep-16-09 08:11 PM by CaliforniaPeggy
Ah, sweetie...
Indeed yes, the cadence does more clearly show when you hear it...
I love reading my stuff when it has those!
I am most fortunate to have such love in my life...
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Edit to add: I forgot to say Thank you!:blush:
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Wed Sep-16-09 08:44 PM
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14. OMG! What a Beautiful Poem!!! |
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:loveya:
So, was that live at open mic night?
I'm impressed with the poem, of course, but also with the technology!!!
:woohoo:
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Wed Sep-16-09 08:48 PM
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Nope, that was not recorded at the open mic! I did it at home, last night...
I"m so pleased you enjoyed this!
Thank you, sweetie...
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Wed Sep-16-09 09:23 PM
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And quiet. I like it, Peg.
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Wed Sep-16-09 09:27 PM
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Oh, thank you, sweetie...
That's just the way it emerged...
I read it last night at the open mic reading I go to every week, and I didn't realize just what I had till I was partway through...
The applause at the end told me.
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Wed Sep-16-09 09:34 PM
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18. Is there a way to hear you? |
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You have a rather magnificent voice and I imagine you read well.
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Wed Sep-16-09 09:44 PM
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19. There's a link at the bottom of my post... |
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You can hear me there!
I love to read my poetry...
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Thu Sep-17-09 12:09 AM
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22. Oh for heaven's sake, you wrote "now with audio." |
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Listening. I can be so numb sometimes.
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Thu Sep-17-09 12:50 AM
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25. Well...I could have put the link for the audio in a more obvious spot... |
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And I think I'll start putting it above the poem...
Hopefully that'll make it more obvious!
No worries, sweetie...
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Wed Sep-16-09 10:44 PM
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20. Lovely Peggy. Really touching. |
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Wed Sep-16-09 11:08 PM
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21. Thank you so much, my dear applegrove... |
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Thu Sep-17-09 12:26 AM
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23. Oh, my dear CaliforniaPeggy! |
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I am not much for poetry, but listening to you really kept my attention.
What a gift you have. And how generous you are to share it.
Thank you!
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Thu Sep-17-09 12:48 AM
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24. My dear question everything! |
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Wow, you just knocked me over!
Thank you so much...
Poetry is meant to be heard...
With your encouragement (and I was going to anyway, lol) I plan to keep on posting the recordings. It's a lot of fun, now that I've got it set up!
Really though...you are too kind, sweetie...
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Thu Sep-17-09 11:38 AM
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26. I still remember the movie "Dead Poets Society" |
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where the assignment for the kids was to write poetry. Robin Williams in a really non-comic touchy role - and I remember thinking then that I would never be able to do this.
Perhaps, with the right coach...
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Thu Sep-17-09 03:26 PM
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27. Oh Peggy, that is such a lovely poem!! |
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And you are a fortunate woman to have experienced that kind of love! I know that I have not, but maybe I will someday. :)
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Thu Sep-17-09 03:30 PM
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28. My dear Pool Hall Ace! |
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Aw, sweetie...
Thank you so much...
I know how lucky I am...and my husband says no, he's the lucky one!
I hope you will, too!
:pals:
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Thu Sep-17-09 07:18 PM
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my favorite yet. it really is good!
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Thu Sep-17-09 07:29 PM
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30. Thank you, my dear blue knight... |
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