CaliforniaPeggy
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Wed Jan-13-10 09:18 PM
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Sun tips up over the dawn the moon slinks away
all is still no pulse of air
the earth holds her breath
we tilt like blooms toward
warmth and nourishing light
Day breaks
© 2010 MLC
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Wed Jan-13-10 09:35 PM
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1. so "simple" and yet says so much.... |
CaliforniaPeggy
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Wed Jan-13-10 09:40 PM
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2. My dear abq e streeter... |
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Edited on Wed Jan-13-10 09:41 PM by CaliforniaPeggy
I appreciate your very kind words...
This style is just what I'm striving for.
On edit: Thanks!
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Wed Jan-13-10 09:57 PM
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3. My Dear CaliforniaPeggy: |
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. Beautiful. Once again, the distillation of a wonderful, powerful moment down to its basic elements. . In other words, poetry as poetry should be. .
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CaliforniaPeggy
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Wed Jan-13-10 10:33 PM
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4. My dear MiddleFingerMom... |
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Ah, I thank you.
I greatly appreciate your comments.
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Wed Jan-13-10 10:42 PM
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CaliforniaPeggy
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Wed Jan-13-10 11:02 PM
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6. My dear Prisoner_Number_Six! |
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Only one?
Just kidding, sweetie!
Thank you so much...
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Wed Jan-13-10 11:03 PM
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as though you were looking out the window with me...
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Wed Jan-13-10 11:49 PM
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And maybe I just am...
Thanks, sweetie...
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Wed Jan-13-10 11:06 PM
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Wed Jan-13-10 11:50 PM
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10. My dear Haole Girl... |
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Thu Jan-14-10 12:38 AM
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"the earth holds her breath". What a marvelous description of that ever so brief moment. Best time of the day.
Great job Peggy! :applause:
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Thu Jan-14-10 12:46 AM
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12. My dear bluesbassman! |
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I was looking for just the best words for that moment...
Those showed up. It's so very still then, and I hoped I had communicated that...
Thank you, sweetie!
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Thu Jan-14-10 02:04 AM
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13. Oh, Peggy, that is beautiful! |
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You are turning into quite the poet!
:loveya: :hug: :loveya:
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Thu Jan-14-10 02:34 AM
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Oh, sweetie, I thank you so much!
That is high praise indeed...
I'm so glad you enjoyed this...
:loveya: :hug: :loveya:
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Thu Jan-14-10 04:47 AM
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and since I have never once in my life been awake to witness a daybreak, I thank you for telling me what it's like :)
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Thu Jan-14-10 11:44 AM
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17. My dear theNotoriousP.I.G... |
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And what makes you think I have?
It's very rare...
But even mid-morning can look like this...
Good to see you, sweetie...
Thank you!
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Thu Jan-14-10 06:12 AM
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perfect description of morning.
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Thu Jan-14-10 11:45 AM
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18. Thank you, my dear Callalily... |
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