CaliforniaPeggy
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Sat Jan-23-10 06:21 PM
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My poem "Pianist" will be published soon in the Bellowing Ark.
Celebrate with me!
Pianist
Young woman slender tall
Delicate fingers bowing over keys
Piano sings giving birth
Blood bones bowl of hip
Multitudes pouring from her hands
© 2010 MLC
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Haole Girl
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Sat Jan-23-10 06:25 PM
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Congratulations, Peggy!
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CaliforniaPeggy
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Sat Jan-23-10 06:27 PM
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I mean, really!
The nerve of those people!
Thanks, sweetie!
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Sat Jan-23-10 06:29 PM
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Though I do have over 800 views for one of my poems in the writing forum on DU. God only knows why! :crazy:
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Sat Jan-23-10 07:41 PM
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. Though not surprising, from what I've seen of your poetry. . Congratulations. Musical composition or poem -- both birthing experiences. . You're helping push me closer to starting up again. Thank you. . :rofl: One of the suggestions Spelchek has for "Attagirl" is "adagio". .
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CaliforniaPeggy
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Sat Jan-23-10 07:48 PM
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7. My dear MiddleFingerMom! |
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Well, I've given birth several times now, by your definition! As well as by the "standard" definition!
I'm waiting patiently (so far, lol) for your work...;-)
I appreciate your very kind words!
"Attagirl" for "adagio"!
I love it!
Thanks, sweetie...
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Sat Jan-23-10 07:42 PM
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5. have I told you how much I enjoy your poems lately? |
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every one of them evokes a wonderful feeling.
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CaliforniaPeggy
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Sat Jan-23-10 07:51 PM
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8. My dear Capn Sunshine... |
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I don't believe you have......until now, anyway.
I am truly happy that my poems do that for you!
Thank you so much...
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Sat Jan-23-10 07:42 PM
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Sat Jan-23-10 07:52 PM
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Sat Jan-23-10 07:57 PM
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Multitudes pouring from her hands
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CaliforniaPeggy
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Sat Jan-23-10 08:23 PM
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11. Oh, thank you, my dear lunatica! |
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I love love love your exuberant smiley!
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Sat Jan-23-10 08:27 PM
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12. It expresses pure joy beautifully doesn't it!? |
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And other than art I love words more than anything! Both are great tools for creative minds.
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Sat Jan-23-10 09:13 PM
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13. I didn't know you had gotten published. Congrats. |
CaliforniaPeggy
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Sat Jan-23-10 09:15 PM
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14. Thank you, my dear applegrove... |
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Yup, this is the third time...
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Sat Jan-23-10 09:42 PM
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17. That's really cool. You certainly know how to paint a mood. |
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Sat Jan-23-10 09:32 PM
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15. Outstanding News!!! =:^) WooHoo!!! |
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Sat Jan-23-10 10:08 PM
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Thank you, sweetie!
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:toast: back atcha!
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Sat Jan-23-10 09:36 PM
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What a great poem! You are very talented... congrats on getting published!
Now I just need a swift kick in the butt to get me started writing again.. lolol.
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Sat Jan-23-10 10:12 PM
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Edited on Sat Jan-23-10 10:12 PM by CaliforniaPeggy
I thank you for your very kind words!
Now....as for motivating you...
How's about I call Skittles to schedule you for an ass-kicking!
Yes INDEED
:P
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On edit: forgot the you...
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Sat Jan-23-10 10:32 PM
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21. if an ass-kicking is what it takes... |
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then hey I'm all for it.. lolol I've had the basic plot of my novel in my mind for about a year and a half now, as well as the characters(my user name comes from the two main characters, a lesbian couple) I just need to get motivated to sit down and start writing!
Thanks for your support! :hug:
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Sat Jan-23-10 10:19 PM
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20. Happy to share your happy moment with you! |
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:toast:
Congrats!
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CaliforniaPeggy
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Sat Jan-23-10 10:48 PM
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Let's hear it for happy moments, indeed!
Thanks, sweetie!
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Sat Jan-23-10 11:46 PM
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Beautiful poem! I could do a critique, but the thread would be locked. :evilgrin:
:loveya:
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CaliforniaPeggy
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Sat Jan-23-10 11:50 PM
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24. My dear liberaltrucker! |
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Well.....you could always call, or PM your critique, you know!:evilgrin:
Aw.....thanks, sweetie!
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Sat Jan-23-10 11:59 PM
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25. "Piano sings giving birth" |
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. . . as a former OB nurse, I love it!!
That really resonates. Beautiful.
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Sun Jan-24-10 12:02 AM
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I was a nurse too...but not OB, alas.
However, it was always interesting to me, esp. as I had my children...
Glad to have your input!
Thanks, sweetie...
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Sun Jan-24-10 12:12 AM
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27. You're coming into your own now. |
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Run with it, you published poet, you.
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CaliforniaPeggy
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Sun Jan-24-10 12:16 AM
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28. My dear Prisoner_Number_Six.... |
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I guess I am, huh?
Well.
I just entered a local poetry contest; I won't know till April if I got anywhere. I have zero idea what sort of poetry is being offered.
Thank you for everything you've done for me, sweetie...
SO much.
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Sun Jan-24-10 12:38 AM
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32. Got it; thank you, sweetie! |
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Sun Jan-24-10 12:22 AM
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29. Kudos to you my dear CaliforniaPeggy |
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Sun Jan-24-10 12:32 AM
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30. My dear BrklynLiberal... |
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Ah, these flowers honor me.
I thank you so much!
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