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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-23-10 06:21 PM
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* A Happy Moment*
My poem "Pianist" will be published soon in the Bellowing Ark.

Celebrate with me!


Pianist

Young woman
slender
tall

Delicate fingers
bowing over
keys

Piano sings
giving birth

Blood
bones
bowl of
hip

Multitudes
pouring from
her hands



© 2010 MLC





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Haole Girl Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-23-10 06:25 PM
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1. Published again?!!?
Congratulations, Peggy!

:woohoo:

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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-23-10 06:27 PM
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2. My dear Haole Girl!
I mean, really!

The nerve of those people!

Thanks, sweetie!

:hug:
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Haole Girl Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-23-10 06:29 PM
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3. You make me feel lazy
Though I do have over 800 views for one of my poems in the writing forum on DU. God only knows why! :crazy:


:hug:

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MiddleFingerMom Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-23-10 07:41 PM
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4. Attagirl!!!!!
.
Though not surprising, from what I've seen of your poetry.
.
Congratulations. Musical composition or poem -- both
birthing experiences.
.
You're helping push me closer to starting up again. Thank you.
.
:rofl: One of the suggestions Spelchek has for "Attagirl"
is "adagio".
.
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-23-10 07:48 PM
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7. My dear MiddleFingerMom!
Well, I've given birth several times now, by your definition! As well as by the "standard" definition!

I'm waiting patiently (so far, lol) for your work...;-)

I appreciate your very kind words!

"Attagirl" for "adagio"!

I love it!

Thanks, sweetie...

:hug:
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Capn Sunshine Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-23-10 07:42 PM
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5. have I told you how much I enjoy your poems lately?
every one of them evokes a wonderful feeling.
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-23-10 07:51 PM
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8. My dear Capn Sunshine...
I don't believe you have......until now, anyway.

I am truly happy that my poems do that for you!

Thank you so much...

:hug:
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AsahinaKimi Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-23-10 07:42 PM
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6. omedetou !
Congrats Peggy san!
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-23-10 07:52 PM
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9. My dear AsahinaKima!
Thank you so much!

:hug:
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lunatica Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-23-10 07:57 PM
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10. It's wonderful!
Multitudes
pouring from
her hands

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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-23-10 08:23 PM
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11. Oh, thank you, my dear lunatica!
I love love love your exuberant smiley!

:hug:
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lunatica Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-23-10 08:27 PM
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12. It expresses pure joy beautifully doesn't it!?
And other than art I love words more than anything! Both are great tools for creative minds.
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applegrove Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-23-10 09:13 PM
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13. I didn't know you had gotten published. Congrats.
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-23-10 09:15 PM
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14. Thank you, my dear applegrove...
Yup, this is the third time...

:hi:
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applegrove Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-23-10 09:42 PM
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17. That's really cool. You certainly know how to paint a mood.
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NYC_SKP Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-23-10 09:32 PM
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15. Outstanding News!!! =:^) WooHoo!!!
:toast:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-23-10 10:08 PM
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18. My dear NYC_SKP!
Thank you, sweetie!

:hug:

:toast: back atcha!

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Terra Alta Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-23-10 09:36 PM
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16. awesome...
What a great poem! You are very talented... congrats on getting published!

Now I just need a swift kick in the butt to get me started writing again.. lolol.
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-23-10 10:12 PM
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19. My dear Terra Alta!
Edited on Sat Jan-23-10 10:12 PM by CaliforniaPeggy
I thank you for your very kind words!

Now....as for motivating you...

How's about I call Skittles to schedule you for an ass-kicking!

Yes INDEED

:P

:hug:


On edit: forgot the you...

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Terra Alta Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-23-10 10:32 PM
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21. if an ass-kicking is what it takes...
then hey I'm all for it.. lolol

I've had the basic plot of my novel in my mind for about a year and a half now, as well as the characters(my user name comes from the two main characters, a lesbian couple) I just need to get motivated to sit down and start writing!

Thanks for your support! :hug:
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AwakeAtLast Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-23-10 10:19 PM
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20. Happy to share your happy moment with you!
:toast:

Congrats!

:applause:

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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-23-10 10:48 PM
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22. My dear AwakeAtLast!
Let's hear it for happy moments, indeed!

Thanks, sweetie!

:hug:
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liberaltrucker Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-23-10 11:46 PM
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23. Congrats, Peggy!
Beautiful poem! I could do a critique, but
the thread would be locked. :evilgrin:

:loveya:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-23-10 11:50 PM
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24. My dear liberaltrucker!
Well.....you could always call, or PM your critique, you know!:evilgrin:

Aw.....thanks, sweetie!

:loveya:
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kimi Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-23-10 11:59 PM
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25. "Piano sings giving birth"
. . . as a former OB nurse, I love it!!

That really resonates. Beautiful.
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jan-24-10 12:02 AM
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26. My dear kimi!
I was a nurse too...but not OB, alas.

However, it was always interesting to me, esp. as I had my children...

Glad to have your input!

Thanks, sweetie...

:hug:
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Prisoner_Number_Six Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jan-24-10 12:12 AM
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27. You're coming into your own now.
Run with it, you published poet, you.

:hug:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jan-24-10 12:16 AM
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28. My dear Prisoner_Number_Six....
I guess I am, huh?

Well.

I just entered a local poetry contest; I won't know till April if I got anywhere. I have zero idea what sort of poetry is being offered.

Thank you for everything you've done for me, sweetie...

SO much.

:hug:
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Prisoner_Number_Six Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jan-24-10 12:33 AM
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31. Read your PM.
:toast:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jan-24-10 12:38 AM
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32. Got it; thank you, sweetie!
:hug:
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BrklynLiberal Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jan-24-10 12:22 AM
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29. Kudos to you my dear CaliforniaPeggy
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jan-24-10 12:32 AM
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30. My dear BrklynLiberal...
Ah, these flowers honor me.

I thank you so much!

:hug:
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