CaliforniaPeggy
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Wed Mar-17-10 10:40 PM
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smooth black
empty
dark
I am alone gregorian chant in solitude
earth turning over
I see
only darkness
© 2010 MLC
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demtenjeep
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Wed Mar-17-10 11:00 PM
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you continue to put out great stuff.
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CaliforniaPeggy
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Wed Mar-17-10 11:06 PM
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I'm glad you think so!
Thank you so much...
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Wed Mar-17-10 11:15 PM
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Somber, without being dark.
Almost restful...
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Makes me want to dig up some Gregorian chants and go to bed to dream...
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CaliforniaPeggy
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Wed Mar-17-10 11:21 PM
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It was very dark on the way home last night from the open mic...
And that triggered this...
Thanks, sweetie...
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Thu Mar-18-10 04:33 AM
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5. My Dear CaliforniaPeggy... |
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. ... EXCELLENT -- once again. . If I hadn't been logged in to DU, I might've had to -- the feeling of isolation was so strongly and viscerally conveyed with this one. . I saw your mention of the inspiration. I hope that was it and that it was transitory. Still feeling that dark... then PM me about it, please? . To get over that poem, I have to go fix myself a bowl of chocolate ice cream -- MAYBE even need some Hershey's syrup to come up from this one. . . . . . . P-s-s-s-s-t. . . . . . . Thanks for that rationalization. .
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CaliforniaPeggy
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Thu Mar-18-10 09:31 AM
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6. My dear MiddleFingerMom! |
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Ah, I'm always good for rationalizations, sweetie!
And thank you for all your good comments...
Glad you enjoyed!
And not to worry....the darkness was very transitory...
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