CaliforniaPeggy
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Sat May-01-10 11:06 PM
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My study door stands open what’s out there
why do I feel
I’m free to go walk away into the spaces
of my life do I dare
but I cannot I’m stuck
here
paralysis snarls yet
what will free that caged door
and let me
out
© 2010 MLC
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Haole Girl
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Sat May-01-10 11:15 PM
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:hug:
Incredible coincidence, really. Incredible.
Thank you for sharing this.
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CaliforniaPeggy
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Sat May-01-10 11:17 PM
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I'm really glad this works so well for you...
You just never know, do you?
Thanks, sweetie...
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Haole Girl
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Sat May-01-10 11:21 PM
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3. I cannot even count the number of times... |
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you have posted something & it's as if you read my mind.
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CaliforniaPeggy
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Sat May-01-10 11:22 PM
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4. Cue the Twilight Zone music! |
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I assure you, it's purely coincidental...
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Haole Girl
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Sat May-01-10 11:24 PM
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5. It has to be coincidental |
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But it's still freaky! lol
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demtenjeep
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Sat May-01-10 11:27 PM
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6. again another great one |
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You have an amazing ability to work with words as well as people and attitudes.
Thank you
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CaliforniaPeggy
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Sat May-01-10 11:33 PM
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I thank you...
The words just show up, and I write them down...
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Sun May-02-10 01:55 PM
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8. This poem made me think of hamsters and gerbils -- really. |
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There's a syndrome with small rodents called 'cage paralysis.' In essence, if the animal is confined in too small an enclosure they lose mobility especially in the hind quarter and start dragging themselves around. The cure? A bigger cage.
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CaliforniaPeggy
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Sun May-02-10 02:07 PM
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Uh, OK...
Whatever floats your boat!
That's the cool thing about poetry: It's open to many interpretations.
I guess we all live in some sort of cage, don't we?
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Sun May-02-10 03:41 PM
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10. all the world's a cage .. or something like that. |
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Sun May-02-10 03:52 PM
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11. My dear auntAgonist... |
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Yeah, that would seem to be the message, wouldn't it?
I was in a strange place when I wrote it.
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Sun May-02-10 09:57 PM
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13. Thanks, my dear seaker! |
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