FraDon
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Wed Nov-15-06 01:18 PM
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A win all the way around (haiku) |
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Ethanol biofuels: “A win all the way around,” said the new Chairman.
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JohnWxy
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Wed Nov-15-06 03:37 PM
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1. poetically pertinent. (never thought I'd see a haiku on DU environment forum! |
FraDon
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Wed Nov-15-06 03:44 PM
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Decades ago I gave up on the big race to compete with speedsters.
Can't read or type fast, no matter how hard I try. Dyslexia sucks.
Haiku offers me a voice, and a way to speak; and it’s challenging.
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Thu Nov-16-06 03:01 PM
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7. Although dyslexia is an advantage in crafting palandromes! |
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Wed Nov-15-06 05:07 PM
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3. your first line has six syllables. |
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Drought grips the planet. Avoid counting your chickens before they hatch, eh?
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FraDon
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Wed Nov-15-06 05:35 PM
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And, it seems, I can't count.
Yours hits the mark. Here's another:
It's not Iraq's fault that our oil pools deep under all their shifting sands.
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Wed Nov-15-06 05:41 PM
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5. Heh :-) Say, we should propose DU haiku day. All posts in Haiku. |
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That would be trippy :evilgrin:
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FraDon
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Wed Nov-15-06 07:10 PM
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All posts in haiku? A wild and bold idea. So make your points brief.
Go for it! What say? No worse an idea than pirate talking day.
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