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Guava Jelly Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Nov-20-04 03:55 PM
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Crappy poetry time
Edited on Sat Nov-20-04 03:56 PM by GoPsUx
written by me in 10 minutes


When I voted for Bush i let the world see
I agree with his lies and dishonesty

When i voted for Bush i told the world that
I approve of prisoners being tortured and killed like rats

When i voted for Bush the message decreed
I'm OK killing people who never attacked me

When i voted for Bush i gave merit to the bombs
I told the world its OK to kill children and moms

When i voted for Bush i proved to the world that
Wrong doesn't matter and our lies are our facts

When i vote for Bush i told our children its OK
To hate liberals and Muslims and even those gay

When i voted for Bush the elderly i taught
Affordable drugs from Canada will never be bought

when i voted for Bush i showed my grandchildren i care
That debt is OK as long as its theirs

When i voted for Bush I said and was for
sending our troops to be killed in an unnecessary war

when i voted for Bush i justified his actions
I gave my stamp of approval showed my satisfaction

When I voted for Bush...
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Neoma Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Nov-20-04 04:10 PM
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1. i wrote one yesterday
but Its not up to my own standards :)
So i may re-wright it or wright another one.
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Guava Jelly Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Nov-20-04 04:18 PM
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2. dont be so critical
even mediocre poetry can be good..
hell mine was so complicated a first grader could have wrote it..better even
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