amerikat
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Wed Jan-04-06 07:11 PM
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"It's Time", a poem to bring the troops home. |
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My friend Alice Fisk is the author of this poem. She would like your comments and feedback.
It's Time
by Alice Connally Fisk October 26th, 2005
IT'S TIME
The bagpipes play Amazing Grace The church bells softly chime More flag-draped coffins, gun salutes. A stirring, now. It's Time
Stepping out a bugler sounds Those haunting notes sublime TAPS breaks apart the grief-filled heart And the soul decides... It's Time
But higher still the tallies go The death and gore and grime Bold heroes whisper from their graves Just bring them back... It's Time.
Let no more lives be sacrificed - Brave troops smack in their prime - Send them home to family, friends IT'S WELL-DESERVED. It's Time.
The signs appear now one by one - Their numbers swiftly climb - Seen all across America The Wisdom Words "IT'S TIME"
Beneath those words our flag is seen It joins the nation's chime The season for to heal is NOW It's more than clear, It's TIME.
Copyright 2005, by Alice Connally Fisk
Permissions will be granted for kindred spirits to place this work on their websites. Afisk10302@aol.com
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Wed Jan-04-06 07:18 PM
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Wed Jan-04-06 07:19 PM
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poigniantly and beautifully said. My only criticism is that saying 'its time' somehow says to me, that there ever WAS a 'time', when any of this crap was .... ok. It was time before any of this started- to stop-
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Wed Jan-04-06 07:19 PM
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3. I think it is lovely. And very true. |
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It is time and past time. How goes it Amerikat?
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amerikat
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Wed Jan-04-06 07:28 PM
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Everything is fine here. How about you?
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Wed Jan-04-06 07:39 PM
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6. the guys are sick but so far I have escaped it. |
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I am taking airborne in hopes of avoiding it entirely.
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Wed Jan-04-06 07:41 PM
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Wed Jan-04-06 07:39 PM
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5. Maybe I should have posted this in GD or the lounge. |
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GD politics moves so fast.
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Wed Jan-04-06 07:40 PM
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7. so do the GD and lounge forums. |
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there's just so many of us with so much to say!
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Wed Jan-04-06 07:51 PM
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