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Mon Mar-24-08 10:49 PM
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supporter made Obama Reponse Ad To Rev. Jeremiah Wright Attack Ad |
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Mon Mar-24-08 10:51 PM
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Mon Mar-24-08 11:11 PM
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6. Started out ok, but the leap to Mccarthyism was badly done...sorry. |
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Mon Mar-24-08 11:28 PM
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rge principles of Mccarthyism is guilt by association, and that's what's happening
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Mon Mar-24-08 11:54 PM
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8. my critique- the jump to McCarthy doesn't mesh with narrative that runs before it. |
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Edited on Mon Mar-24-08 11:57 PM by cryingshame
and it also tends to be inflammatory rather than conciliatory.
You want to leave the viewer with a positive, feel good clip for Obama.
You want an ending that builds on the concept of Unity.
IF (big IF) you were going to use McCarthy, it'd have to be inserted in the middle and there's no room for it.
Ideally, McCarthy would be used in an attack that doesn't show ANY images of Obama. You don't want the two associated that closely.
This is how our subconscious minds link images.
My advise, as an art/media critic, is to rework the ending... with something that evokes a POSTIVE feeling towards Obama.
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