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Corey_Baker08 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jan-19-05 10:01 PM
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The Mourning After
Edited on Wed Jan-19-05 10:02 PM by Corey_Baker04
I am unveiling this story I wrote for my 9th grade Composition class on the eve of the Inaguration of Bush. This is a realisitc account of how hard this election hit me. My teacher claimed it brought tears to her eyes to know a 15 year old cared so much about his country and its future direction....

The Mourning After

On November 3, 2004, assuming America had truly made its decision, we woke to a President returning to office as opposed to a newly elected one. To the victor goes a nation divided. A nation split over its place in the world, over its basic values, over its future direction. No matter who would have won, the uncivil war is likely to continue. After such a venomous campaign, will it be possible to pick up the pieces, bridge the gaps and reunite the United States? To restore trust- not only in our leaders but also in one another? The stakes were higher than we ever could have imagined.

I felt my heart sink as I saw Ohio fall. I was in disbelief and shock, and a state of personal mourning. After all, I had worked so hard and wanted so deeply for John Kerry to win this election. I sat back and reflected on why this election was so important to me and why I had such a sickening feeling in my stomach. No one really knows how terribly depressed I was the days following the election, yet I was not alone, 55 million other Americans were also in disbelief, but none wanted it as much as I did. The past four years of the Bush administration’s polices had taken such a devastating blow to my world that I could not stand to sit back and let this man be re-elected for another term. After all, what had he done for me, what had he done for my family or friends or even my community, the answer is nothing. He is the first President in seventy-five years to go a single term without creating a single job. Thanks to his reckless policies that give tax breaks to companies that ship our American jobs to cheap overseas labor markets, my parents are both now out of jobs sitting on the unemployment line, Thank you Mr. President. Thanks to his plan, Myself, along with 28 million other children in the United States are now without health care. I just wander if he ever sits back and thinks of how many lives he can screw up in a single day. Did it make him satisfied as he sat back and ignored the needs of working families while gave his gave his eighty-nine billion dollars in tax cuts to the top 1% of America that made over $200,000 a year. He turned his back on the middle class, yet on November 2, they failed to fight back. Thanks to his fiscal spending and reckless polices Christmas will not come at all this year to many families struggling to make ends meet, to put a roof over their kids head, and clothes on their backs, Merry Christmas from your President, George Dubya Bush.

Now as I sat back and watched what I would consider being the fall of a nation. I just wonder what I could have done differently. Wishing endlessly that I had done more. I was confident that Ohio would go for Kerry this year because Americans were ready for a fresh start. Thoughts of the rally that I attended in Dayton with John Kerry rushed through my head. I Remember being only inches away from the man I admired most in the world, I was optimistic that America's future was bright, and that our best days were yet to come. Now I sat in doubt about the very future of our country, wondering how the working class was going to survive another four years of his reckless polices. I remembered that same day in our schools mock election John Kerry losing by only 11 votes, Thinking of how split Americans were about this election. As the hours passed I lay in my bed trying to sleep but it was no use. Months of hardwork and dedication to this cause I cared so greatly for was now turned into useless memories.

As I woke the morning of November 3, 2004 I had the worst hangover of my life, election edition. I had spent many hours sitting up thinking of what had just happened. Going on minimum rest with a severe headache and discomfort in my heart, I did the hardest thing I could ever do, face the world in a time of defeat. I knew it would not be easy walking into that school, as everybody knew that just the day before I truly believed John Kerry was going to win Ohio and win this election. It was not a good day for me to say the least nor was it a good week or for that matter a good month. John Kerry conceded his race for Presidency that day and it was broadcast over TV in many classrooms in the school. Much to the delight of the preps and jocks and people that have never worked a day in their life, like it or not George W Bush was our President. As I watched John Kerry's concession speech that day, I remember, many things really touched me, one was when John Kerry said that he said, “I would not give up this fight if there was a chance that we would prevail. But it is now clear that even when all the provisional ballots are counted, which they will be, there won't be enough outstanding votes for us to be able to win Ohio. And therefore, we can not win this election”
also when he said ,"Now, more than ever, with our soldiers in harm's way, we must stand together and succeed in Iraq and win the war on terror. I will also do everything in my power to ensure that my party, a proud Democratic Party, stands true to our best hopes and ideals.”

So vaguely do I remember a "Four More years" chant that started in the hallway that day, with my emotions running high I attempted to ignore it and move on. It was not an easy thing to do but as I looked around and seen the joy in the faces of those participating in the chant. It didn't mean anything to me because the ones that where doing it had life handed to them, they had never worked a day and they probably never will. I realized that they are just as stupidly ignorant as the as the idiot they had just elected for a second term. Yet, as Sen. Kerry said, “In America it is vital that every vote count, and that every vote be counted. But the outcome should be decided by voters, not a protracted legal process.”


While the loss severely devastated me, I have learned from it. In order for our country to function properly we must all come together in a time of unity. But in an American election, there are no losers, because whether or not our candidates are successful, the next morning we all wake up as Americans. And that -- that is the greatest privilege and the most remarkable good fortune that can come to us on earth.
No one knows which George Bush will show up to take his inauguration on January 20, 2005. For the fate of our Nation it better be a uniter, not a divider. It better be a man that is willing to fight for our jobs just as hard as he did for his own. These next four years could be the best time in a world devastated by the on going threat of terrorism, or they could be the most divided four years our Nation has ever witnessed. As far as John Kerry goes, Just like you had mine, I will always have your back, and I will never Stop Fighting for what is Right....


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helderheid Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jan-19-05 10:04 PM
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1. BRAVO!!!!!!!
This is inspiring. Thank you.
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ailsagirl Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jan-19-05 10:10 PM
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2. Corey, that was beautifully written. Thank you
You must be around, what, 14? I'm impressed that you're taking an interest in politics and I only hope that there are many more out there like you. I know how you felt "the mourning after"-- I wanted to stay in bed and pull the covers over my head but I knew I couldn't. I was in shock for many days, then, when that wore off, the grief hit. A few things kept me sane-- friends, DU, and reading... lots of reading (fiction!).

You write well-- thank you for sharing that.

Like you, I will never stop fighting either.

:)



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super simian Donating Member (292 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jan-19-05 10:19 PM
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3. awesome...
thank you!

Did JK really say this?
Yet, as Sen. Kerry said, “In America it is vital that every vote count, and that every vote be counted. But the outcome should be decided by voters, not a protracted legal process.”

I didn't hear it. What "protracted legal process" is he talking about?
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RevCheesehead Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jan-19-05 10:30 PM
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4. You are SO ahead of the game!
My God, how I wish I was so keenly aware at 15!

Your writing touched me as well - and I can hardly wait until you join the ranks of voters in 2008.

Thank you for an excellent post.
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Corey_Baker08 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jan-19-05 10:31 PM
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5. Help Me Keep this kicked plz
I think its important every true democrat on DU reads this story to let them know the next generation of voters has their back. I will be voting for the first time in 2008 and I will keep up the fight, will you.

Kick
:dem:
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Helga Scow Stern Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jan-19-05 10:31 PM
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6. Right on, Corey!
Soon you'll be writing speeches........
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mordarlar Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jan-19-05 10:38 PM
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7. Kick for the billiant minds of our future! You made me sob. Thank you: D
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SaveAmerica Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jan-19-05 10:38 PM
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8. No, you were not alone, so many of us felt like that...
Your words are beautiful, thanks for sharing your paper here. (You brought tears to my eyes too!)


Hope is on the way, and it's in the faces (and words) of our children.
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understandinglife Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jan-19-05 10:39 PM
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9. Superb Corey; thank you (n/t)



BE THE BUSH OPPOSITION; 24/7
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helderheid Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jan-19-05 10:46 PM
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10. Stay out of trouble
so you can run for office. We need people like you! :)
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Corey_Baker08 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jan-19-05 10:55 PM
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11. One Last Kick b4 bed
KICK
:dem:




:dem:

Sleep well everyone- we have a hard day ahead of us tomorrow-stand tall, stand proud, represent us anyway you want!!!

:dem:

Just think four years from this exact same day we'll all be talking about how fun tomorrow will be going to a democrats Presidential inaguration.

Sleep Well and lets keep kickin.
:dem:
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il_lilac Donating Member (756 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jan-19-05 11:04 PM
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12. I have a 15 year old son...
who believes and hurts like you do. You are not alone- we are not alone. Thanks for the beautiful words.
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Corey_Baker08 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jan-20-05 07:43 AM
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13. Kick
:dem:
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OmmmSweetOmmm Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jan-20-05 07:53 AM
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14. Corey, you brought tears to my eyes. For one so young, you really get it.
Thank you.
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davidgmills Donating Member (651 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jan-20-05 07:57 AM
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15. Keep writing son
You have the gift. You obviously love to write. That is the gift. The words will always find a way to come when you love to write.
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Hugin Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jan-20-05 09:45 AM
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16. Wowzer.
That's quite the paper!

Thanks for sharing it with us Corey. =)
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Kota Donating Member (658 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jan-20-05 11:13 AM
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17. I think you just inspired me to get over that hangover.
I guess its time, and with people like you I see so much hope for our future. Thanks Corey
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NickiWitch Donating Member (303 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jan-20-05 11:21 AM
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18. WONDERFUL!
Between you and *my* sons, faith in our future has been restored.

Keep fighting the good fight!!

You're parents must be proud.

Peace!

Nicki
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NationalEnquirer Donating Member (571 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jan-20-05 11:23 AM
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19. Are you SURE you are only 15?
When I was 15, I was too busy reading sci-fi books to give a crap about what went on.
You are an admarable young American.
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MadisonProgressive Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jan-20-05 11:40 AM
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20. I remember when I was about that age, there was a big story
running around about 'euthanasia'. I was too busy with school and sports to really listen closely, but I remember being a bit perplexed at what the young people in Asia were doing that was getting everyon so concerned.

Rock on Corey!
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Amaryllis Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jan-20-05 12:15 PM
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22. I teach eighth graders, and there are many like Corey who truly get it
and care as passionatly as he does, and who display his level of awarenes. I also teach a small writing class in my home and have kids from three different school districts. They all say they and most of the people in their classes know the election was stolen. I do live in a very liberal city and thesekids all have liberal, informed, educated parents; however, this to me was quite impressive that so many of them state so matter of factly that it was indeed stolen. Can you imagine growing up knowing your elections are a sham?

What is impressive to me is that Corey gets the big picture even living in an area that is apparently (right, Corey?) primarily conservative.
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troubleinwinter Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jan-20-05 11:53 AM
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21. Cory, it is wonderful...
PLEASE forward it to some of our Senators and Congress members. They will be pleased to know that our young people care about our country's future.

My favorite part of your essay, is that you state that being an American is a privilege. I do not like people claiming to be "proud to be an American", as so many of them have done nothing to earn it. You have.

Thank you for sharing your thoughts and writing with us.
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Corey_Baker08 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jan-20-05 04:03 PM
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23. Thank-You
I would be glad to send this to some Congress men and women and the US senators, can NE one give me some email addresses for anyone?

Boxer, Kerry, Bayh,Obama and all the other great Democratic Senators
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babylonsister Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jan-20-05 04:50 PM
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24. I have to kick this for Corey. You deserve so
much respect for being so thoughtful, and you write beautifully. We need a lot more like you. Thank you, Corey! And let me know; I'll vote for you!
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pamela Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jan-20-05 07:59 PM
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25. Corey, this is great!
Thank you. This really made me smile.
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Vektor Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jan-20-05 08:02 PM
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26. Kick, and Corey, that was beautiful.
Wonderful essay!
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AntiCoup2K4 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jan-20-05 08:07 PM
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27. Thanks Corey!
It's always good to be reminded that the next generation isn't entirely brainwashed. Too bad we can't say that about the majority of your school :(
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Yellow Horse Donating Member (462 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jan-20-05 08:13 PM
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28. And Corey, no matter what, I STILL think Kerry won Ohio!
Sorry we weren't able to prove it one way or the other in time for today, but The Truth always seems to find its way out eventually.

NGU!
Always keep fighting for what you think is right!

Marybeth
Eastern Ohio / PA Border Area Regional Coordinator
2004 Green Party Ohio Recount
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mcscajun Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jan-20-05 08:57 PM
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29. Keepin' it kicked!
:)
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texpatriot2004 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jan-20-05 09:11 PM
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30. Well done. Thanks for sharing it with us. n/t
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Corey_Baker08 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jan-20-05 10:37 PM
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31. Kick
:dem:
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Patsy Stone Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jan-20-05 11:14 PM
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32. Corey, that's amazing
I can certainly see how it brought tears to your teacher's eyes. Never give up fighting for what you want and for what you believe. Never. You are the future and we are counting on you to do what needs to be done. Thanks for sharing that.

NGU
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demodonkey Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jan-21-05 07:12 AM
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33. Morning Kick for The Mourning After, and Corey
:kick:
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dalloway Donating Member (744 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jan-21-05 09:59 AM
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34. Corey, I wish I had been half as articulate at twice the age...
You are an amazing young man.

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Corey_Baker08 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jan-21-05 09:20 PM
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35. requested kick
this is the alst time I kick...I promise...if u want to please do.
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kitkat65 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jan-21-05 09:47 PM
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36. You write very eloquently - thank you for sharing your experience
We've got your back too, Corey.
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consciousobjector Donating Member (173 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jan-21-05 10:20 PM
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37. You are amazing!
there is hope for the future...KICK :kick:
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