WhiteTara
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Fri Jul-25-08 09:18 PM
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Fog Chases Me Up Mountain And through Forests. It Covers the Moon Just as I reach my Door
I thought the poetry form was called Esteree, but I couldn't find it in THE GOOGLE, but it adds one syllable for every line for as long as the poem goes on.
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Sat Jul-26-08 09:06 PM
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1. Interesting. Thanks. nt |
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Sun Jul-27-08 12:19 AM
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2. I really like this poetry form |
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it pares everything to its essence.
I thought it was called Esteree; so named for the woman who created it. It adds one syllable per line, giving it a cadence with out the iambic pentameter form.
I composed this on my way home from the coast as the evening fog was rolling in.
Thanks for acknowledging me. I read your poetry often.
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Sun Jul-27-08 12:34 AM
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http://pages.prodigy.net/sol.magazine/pl01form.htm#ethereeI'd never heard of this poetry form before; thanks for exposing me to it. I like your poem, BNL. :)
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Sun Jul-27-08 07:47 AM
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A very nice poem.Simple and direct yet paints a vivid picture. For some reason the form reminds me of Hiaku.I know they are completely differant forms but yet it still invokes imagery like hiakus do for me.
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