Tom Yossarian Joad
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Sat Aug-26-06 09:29 AM
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and soft summer flowers
Staggering steps
and hard metal
She remembers her husband
and autumnal nights
in the car
under moonlight
with quick heavy
breathing
and hard metal
She remembers her childhood
the praise and
the glory
from mother and dad
and hard metal
and she remembers graduating
from high school
and drinking beer
with friends
and hard metal
And remembers joining
the reserve
the army
and knowing it will
pay
for college
and hard metal
and she remembers saying goodbye to
her mom
her father
and leaving for a place she didn't
know
and hard metal
And she remembers the heat
in the big loud
metal box
before
it exploded
and a brief flash of pain
and she sees the vehicle
and hard metal
over her body
and sees her blood
feed the sand
she remembers the sound
before she became incomplete
and she tries
to say goodbye.
end.
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Sat Aug-26-06 09:51 AM
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Sat Aug-26-06 10:17 AM
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3. That's the thing... We all need to do just that. |
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Sat Aug-26-06 10:02 AM
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2. There was a story earlier last week |
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about moms coming back from Iraq and their inability to cope with the reality of being with their children again. One kept a knife with her at all times now...
But not coming home at all... and all for the sake of a few men's greed for oil.
So sad. So incredibly sad.
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Sat Aug-26-06 10:53 AM
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4. I read that ... It was heart breaking. Many people aren't built for war. |
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As a matter of fact, I don't believe anyone is.
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Sat Aug-26-06 12:19 PM
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Sat Aug-26-06 03:16 PM
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Edited on Sat Aug-26-06 03:16 PM by longship
Beautiful work. Thanks. :kick:
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Sat Aug-26-06 04:22 PM
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Too many things forgotten.
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Sat Aug-26-06 05:09 PM
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Sat Aug-26-06 05:24 PM
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Your words touched my heart.
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Sat Aug-26-06 07:06 PM
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13. Thanks, they're necessary sometimes. |
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Sat Aug-26-06 05:26 PM
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12. painful, hard to read |
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Sat Aug-26-06 07:13 PM
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14. Wow... I stole your words. Sorry. And thanks. |
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Sun Aug-27-06 11:33 AM
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With respects to the families of those in the plane from Kentucky.
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