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The Straight Story Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Nov-09-06 08:30 PM
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Poem my wife wrote I wanted to share:
Edited on Thu Nov-09-06 08:32 PM by The Straight Story
(Can't blame a lucky guy like me for sharing this can ya?)

My Husband

We have seen the current of time run through our home like a flash flood
We have swam the dark currents and enjoyed the cool water in times of joy
We have held on to each other during the undertow of pain.
We have tasted the salt of tears and felt the warmth of each others touch
Like a garden embracing the sunlight we have always been planted firmly where we need to be.
Your roots are my roots now.

Our family tree, with its gnarled and twisted branches, gracefully bend in the momentum but they never break.

Bring on the rain……..

The sound of your footsteps is like an old song that I never tire of hearing

Play it again Sam……

Your laughter is like the rain drenching the parched sands of the desert
Its as old as time and as new as today

We have heard the concerto of a child’s laughter echo in our hearts
Our home has been a symphony
and we are playing in a three man band.

Harlem jazz has nothing on us baby…..

You have been my comfort like a lazy Saturday afternoon
You have been my lover and touched me like a slow fire burning
Your heart is like an island where only you and I play in the waves
The sandcastles of old dreams may have been washed away
but we always know when to rebuild them
My cup runneth over…..

May the fountain never run dry….

I love you babe….I know its short…but its my thank you for being the man that you are.







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Blue State Blues Donating Member (575 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Nov-09-06 08:33 PM
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1. Beautiful
Thanks for sharing. You're a lucky guy -- you know that don't you? ;)
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Divernan Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Nov-09-06 08:34 PM
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2. What you and your wife have is rare and precious.
Sounds like you both appreciate that fact.
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malaise Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Nov-09-06 08:34 PM
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3. Lovely
K&R
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spuddonna Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Nov-09-06 08:39 PM
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4. That's so incredibly beautiful...
Thank you for sharing it!

This part made me cry:
"We have heard the concerto of a child’s laughter echo in our hearts
Our home has been a symphony
and we are playing in a three man band."

Wow...
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MelissaB Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Nov-09-06 08:42 PM
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6. It is beautiful.
I sit here with tears running down my cheeks. He's a lucky man.
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AutumnMist Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Nov-09-06 08:54 PM
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12. Thank You!!!!!
:hi:
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AutumnMist Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Nov-09-06 08:51 PM
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10. Thank You
:pals:
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karmaqueen Donating Member (417 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Nov-09-06 08:41 PM
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5. How wonderful!
There is nothing more precious inn the world is love between two soul mates. So happy for you that you have obviously found it. May you have a long and happy life together. Thanks for sharing!
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AIJ Alom Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Nov-09-06 08:50 PM
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7. You lucky guy you ! And the prose was absolutely fantastic !
Does she have a sister ?
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AutumnMist Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Nov-09-06 08:51 PM
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9. I Do Actually
but we are like night and day....thank you! :)
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AIJ Alom Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Nov-09-06 08:58 PM
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13. Your welcome. And keep that gift alive. You express
yourself very well.
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AutumnMist Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Nov-09-06 08:50 PM
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8. This Ones For You Babe!
:kick: Kick for the other half.......
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The Straight Story Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Nov-09-06 10:07 PM
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14. Thanks hun
could not help but share it. You really should write more!! Hope you feel better soon babe.
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AutumnMist Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Nov-09-06 10:12 PM
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15. You Are Welcome
:hug:
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SaveOurDemocracy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Nov-09-06 08:52 PM
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11. I'm so glad she has you, and you have her ...

...and I'm so glad you've BOTH found your way here, and have chosen to share so many intimate, touching, painful, poignant, beautiful and joyful moments with us.


That poem is a lovely, lyrical gift I know you'll treasure forever. Thank you. :grouphug:




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