The Straight Story
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Thu Nov-09-06 08:30 PM
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Poem my wife wrote I wanted to share: |
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Edited on Thu Nov-09-06 08:32 PM by The Straight Story
(Can't blame a lucky guy like me for sharing this can ya?)
My Husband
We have seen the current of time run through our home like a flash flood We have swam the dark currents and enjoyed the cool water in times of joy We have held on to each other during the undertow of pain. We have tasted the salt of tears and felt the warmth of each others touch Like a garden embracing the sunlight we have always been planted firmly where we need to be. Your roots are my roots now.
Our family tree, with its gnarled and twisted branches, gracefully bend in the momentum but they never break.
Bring on the rain……..
The sound of your footsteps is like an old song that I never tire of hearing
Play it again Sam……
Your laughter is like the rain drenching the parched sands of the desert Its as old as time and as new as today
We have heard the concerto of a child’s laughter echo in our hearts Our home has been a symphony and we are playing in a three man band.
Harlem jazz has nothing on us baby…..
You have been my comfort like a lazy Saturday afternoon You have been my lover and touched me like a slow fire burning Your heart is like an island where only you and I play in the waves The sandcastles of old dreams may have been washed away but we always know when to rebuild them My cup runneth over…..
May the fountain never run dry….
I love you babe….I know its short…but its my thank you for being the man that you are.
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Thu Nov-09-06 08:33 PM
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Thanks for sharing. You're a lucky guy -- you know that don't you? ;)
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Thu Nov-09-06 08:34 PM
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2. What you and your wife have is rare and precious. |
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Sounds like you both appreciate that fact.
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Thu Nov-09-06 08:34 PM
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Thu Nov-09-06 08:39 PM
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4. That's so incredibly beautiful... |
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Thank you for sharing it!
This part made me cry: "We have heard the concerto of a child’s laughter echo in our hearts Our home has been a symphony and we are playing in a three man band."
Wow...
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Thu Nov-09-06 08:42 PM
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I sit here with tears running down my cheeks. He's a lucky man.
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Thu Nov-09-06 08:54 PM
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Thu Nov-09-06 08:51 PM
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Thu Nov-09-06 08:41 PM
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There is nothing more precious inn the world is love between two soul mates. So happy for you that you have obviously found it. May you have a long and happy life together. Thanks for sharing!
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Thu Nov-09-06 08:50 PM
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7. You lucky guy you ! And the prose was absolutely fantastic ! |
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Thu Nov-09-06 08:51 PM
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but we are like night and day....thank you! :)
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Thu Nov-09-06 08:58 PM
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13. Your welcome. And keep that gift alive. You express |
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Thu Nov-09-06 08:50 PM
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8. This Ones For You Babe! |
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:kick: Kick for the other half.......
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Thu Nov-09-06 10:07 PM
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could not help but share it. You really should write more!! Hope you feel better soon babe.
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Thu Nov-09-06 08:52 PM
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11. I'm so glad she has you, and you have her ... |
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...and I'm so glad you've BOTH found your way here, and have chosen to share so many intimate, touching, painful, poignant, beautiful and joyful moments with us.
That poem is a lovely, lyrical gift I know you'll treasure forever. Thank you. :grouphug:
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