shadowknows69
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Thu Aug-02-07 08:52 AM
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"Dead land merchant" (a semi-epic poem) |
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Edited on Thu Aug-02-07 08:53 AM by shadowknows69
Across miles of the dead lands I roam Astride my steed of steel and chrome.
I seek out the settlements the survivors have made. I bring with me knowledge and items to trade.
Old now my soul and my body a shell Useless to all save that which I sell
Information my barter if I’m lacking in goods Tales of the outside, and I tell all I should.
I know the roads that are safe and those still in peril Where the air is still clean and waters still sterile.
Not just current events, I try to bring more Histories and tales of how the world was before.
Retelling what brought us to the place we now find. I dream of the day it all leaves my mind
How humanity sowed its own seeds Of its own destruction, placing its greed over its needs
30 years ago when I was a younger and stronger man When the Hell began. When they bombed Iran
All the horsemen of prophecy were let loose on that day War, Famine, Pestilence and Death. Devil come to collect his pay.
The government zealots told us all not to fret Despite some setbacks we’d win the day yet.
The army of “Jesus” it seemed Wasn’t doing as well as the Good Book had deemed.
Apparently the Generals of “God” didn’t have a clue. What a billion pissed off Muslims could potentially do.
Chaos and death reigned, for a decade, the oil barely ran. And a radioactive hole where once sat Tehran.
The Rubicon crossed the world joined the fray World War Three they called it and we do to this day.
But lost in time it is as the many wars before. Only the few left of my age remember anything more.
What’s left of us now history will ignore.
For what future can come? Man’s time soon is done.
No lessons learned, barbaric as ever, as our cities and country burned. Crops barely grow now. Animals are scarce and we don’t dare eat our herds.
We go through the motions. Trying to rebuild on dead lands, souls devoid of emotion.
Watching friend and lover slowly or quickly die. By brutal violence or cancers. Time after time. No tears left to cry.
Killing each other for food, land and gas. Even in the end, nothing changes at last.
I ride through the dead lands. Merchant and prophet of things past. Hear my stories at your peril. The truth will cut you like glass.
I know the history of our doom, offering no light in the gloom. Just a dead land merchant, selling the story of our ruin.
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bryant69
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Thu Aug-02-07 08:57 AM
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1. Sunshine, lollipops and rainbows lyrics |
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Sunshine, lollipops and rainbows, Everything that's wonderful is what I feel when we're together, Brighter than a lucky penny, When you're near the rain cloud disappears, dear, And I feel so fine just to know that you are mine.
My life is sunshine, lollipops and rainbows, That's how this refrain goes, so come on, join in everybody! Sunshine, lollipops and rainbows, Everything that's wonderful is sure to come your way When you're in love to stay.
Sunshine, lollipops and rainbows, Everything that's wonderful is what I feel when we're together, Brighter than a lucky penny, When you're near the rain cloud disappears, dear, And I feel so fine just to know that you are mine.
My life is sunshine, lollipops and rainbows, That's how this refrain goes, so come on, join in everybody!
Sunshine, lollipops and rainbows, Everything that's wonderful is sure to come your way 'Cause you're in love, you're in love, And love is here to stay!By Lesley Gore Bryant Check it out --> http://politicalcomment.blogspot.com
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shadowknows69
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Thu Aug-02-07 08:58 AM
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I think we needed that contrast in this thread lol.
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Thu Aug-02-07 02:40 PM
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3. It is not hard to picture, is it. . |
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Fri Aug-03-07 06:26 AM
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4. wow- this is great- dark, but great |
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did you write this, Shadow? If so, I think that the solitude that your cab can provide is a place to get ideas. I also thank Bryant for those contrasting words- the difference is night and day.
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Fri Aug-03-07 09:08 AM
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It's usually and original piece of mine unless I state otherwise. Kind of my own "Road Warrior" tribute I guess.
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Fri Aug-03-07 09:08 PM
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6. that is what I thought, Shadow |
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but you really have a gift with words.
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Fri Aug-03-07 09:46 PM
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7. That is really powerful. |
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The World is a Beautiful Place by Lawrence Ferlinghetti
The world is a beautiful place to be born into if you don't mind happiness not always being so very much fun if you don't mind a touch of hell now and then just when everything is fine because even in heaven they don't sing all the time
The world is a beautiful place to be born into if you don't mind some people dying all the time or maybe only starving some of the time which isn't half bad if it isn't you
Oh the world is a beautiful place to be born into if you don't much mind a few dead minds in the higher places or a bomb or two now and then in your upturned faces or such other improprieties as our Name Brand society is prey to with its men of distinction and its men of extinction and its priests and other patrolmen
and its various segregations and congressional investigations and other constipations that our fool flesh is heir to
Yes the world is the best place of all for a lot of such things as making the fun scene and making the love scene and making the sad scene and singing low songs and having inspirations and walking around looking at everything and smelling flowers and goosing statues and even thinking and kissing people and making babies and wearing pants and waving hats and dancing and going swimming in rivers on picnics in the middle of the summer and just generally 'living it up' Yes but then right in the middle of it comes the smiling mortician.
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