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Pushed To The Left Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Sep-23-08 06:43 AM
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My Dad's 9-11 Memorial Poem
I meant to post this much earlier. He is an excellent writer!



9/11 Memorial
Copyright 9/11/08 by Norman Dean Weibel



Thrusting high in the New York City azure sky

twin towers emblematic of capitals great power

to reach the very sun, they seemed destined to try.

Within the hour, under attack, they would quickly die.



Twenty-three Saudi men, vengeance in mind

aboard four glistening aluminum and titanium

cylinders with wings would swiftly surely find

targets of great magnitude with destruction the sum.



Inside the towers were both women and men

representing all the cultures found worldwide

gathered tasks to perform, each as a citizen

free to pursue their secret dreams with pride.



It was business as usual. No one dreamt that day

of the destruction that was that morn to come.

No one but the twenty-three could clearly say

They had come there to die; that was simply dumb.



Yet, with only box cutters as weapons these desperate

Men hijacked commercial airliners, four doomed flights.

The first hit the south tower and as flames sealed its fate

The second slammed the north tower, the deadliest of sights.



Mushrooms of fire high in the morning New York sky

blossom before the buildings start their fateful fall.

As the towers begin to tumble and their occupants die,

from high windows people leap adding to the fateful pall.



Three thousand five hundred souls that day would cease

to live and breathe; to create and build their lives.

Crumbling towers ate them up, threw their ashes on the breeze.

They left children. They left grieving husbands and wives.



The third plane on its deadly way over Washington D. C. flew.

Toward the Pentagon, sitting in thought to be impregnable repose.

Soon screaming down from the morning sky the plane slew

Military figures, men and women, officers and men death chose.



The carnage here was less than in the towers, but people died.

Children were orphaned and husbands and wives were widowed.

Grieving families were shocked and witnesses to the scene cried.

Could this be the end? Not a chance. We all know what followed.



Flight ninety-three planned to hit the Capitol and planned to kill

Lawmakers; Senators or Congressmen, they didnʼt really care.

This time Americans fought back. Passengers and plane were kill,

as were the Saudis who had seized the plane. They died there.



The passenger revolt came too late to save the passengers lives,

though thanks to cell phones some were able with family to talk

and let them know what was happening to their husbands and wives.

From the terribly torn sod on a Pennsylvania hillside no one would walk.



Our President, after spiriting his Saudi friends away to their home,

declared we were at war with terrorism and inspired great pride.

Every American felt violated and wanted to fight back, protect home

and hearth from further attack. Righteous wrath fumed nation wide.



All Islam was suspect. We knew it was they who our towers wrecked

and brought worldwide support and sympathy for us to our side.

The whole world was shocked, but Islamic celebration flowed unchecked.

The great Satan had been wounded grievously fostering Islamic pride.



Our reaction was swift to come. Anger seethed and burst forth

across our great nation. That our loss could be cause for celebration

was something hard to understand. From south to furthest north

people didnʼt understand how Muslims could cheer our degradation.



The president used this rage to attack a dictator in far distant Iraq.

At first it was to destroy weapons of mass destruction destined for us.

When none were found, this dictator CIA helped dominate Iraq

was declared a despot removed because he was an undemocratic cuss.



Strangely, our invasion was not seen by all Iraqis as liberation

and this nation cobbled together after WW II flew apart.

Suniʼs fought Shiiteʼs and both fought the tribal Kurds.

Defeating the dictatorʼs reign of terror was the start.

As bad as he was he held Iraq together with power, not nerds.



With our invasion, this stability was lost and those thoughts

of instant democracy lost to the reality of civil war.

Civilian contractors on top of soldiers and Marines in clots

of controlled zones quickly learned just how to score.



For the military it was learning whom to suppress to stay alive.

Civilian contractors learned whom they might exploit.

Charging quadruple costs for shoddy work made them thrive.

At ripping off both the U. S. and Iraqis they became adroit.



Mr. Bush and Mr. Cheney jointly brought this nightmare to pass

in the name of patriotism and American national pride.

While they and greedy corporations have become rich while, alas,

theyʼve nearly destroyed the middle class nationwide.



Seven years after the grievous attack, its leader Osama Bin Laden

remains free. Our nation spends eleven billion a week in Iraqʼs war

and our national debt soars. Surely there must be a witch or maven

able to extricate us before both death toll and costs really soar.



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cali Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Sep-23-08 06:51 AM
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1. Sorry, I don't care for your dad's sentiments or writing
I particularly don't care for his Muslim bashing.
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iamahaingttta Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Sep-23-08 08:30 AM
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2. Yeah, that was pretty bad.
Not everyone can be a poet.
Not everyone should...
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iamahaingttta Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Sep-23-08 08:30 AM
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3. Ooops!
Edited on Tue Sep-23-08 08:31 AM by iamahaingttta
Dupe...
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Pushed To The Left Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Sep-23-08 04:57 PM
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4. I can guarantee that "Muslim-bashing" was not his intention.
My dad is strongly opposed to the Iraq occupation and has been from the very beginning. He probably dislikes the Bush Administration even more than I do! I honestly think people are misunderstanding the poem. His other writings have been extremely well-liked on DU.
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