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Sat Jan-23-10 07:20 PM
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Obsidian hearts Born of rock and fire What tracks do you leave? By following your desires?
Flames fanned from ages unknown Forged in the passion Gaia tends the flames Speaking to her children By words like smoky whispers If you listen she may call your name
Smoldering signals unseen or plainly viewed Embers blown by the winds Some burn away; others still float lost Those that travel true find new fuel And the fires light anew
Let the smoke rise to the spirits Obsidian hearts are burning Dark in appearance and cold to the mundane But holding reactions barely contained Explosive souls only stable together Connections deeper than forever
The heat melts the world around Obsidian hearts erupting Gaia’s sacred glow grows, enveloping all Laying waste to reason And yet lighting the way To destinies unachieved And dreams never before believed
To bring fire to the frozen To find the fuel for the flame Prometheus had one Obsidian hearts Not often wanted by the owners But it’s often by fate they are chosen -S
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Sat Jan-23-10 07:32 PM
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Sat Jan-23-10 07:33 PM
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2. I'd like a review of this lock and move. My poetry has always been allowed in GD. |
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I have a journal full of evidence if the mod in question would like to check.
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Sat Jan-23-10 07:36 PM
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5. you touch on some interesting thoughts in your poem |
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Edited on Sat Jan-23-10 07:51 PM by TexasObserver
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Sat Jan-23-10 07:37 PM
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6. I can't help but agree with you. |
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It wasn't directed at you TO.
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Sat Jan-23-10 07:34 PM
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3. all that aside, really nice work. |
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Edited on Sat Jan-23-10 07:34 PM by Capn Sunshine
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Sat Jan-23-10 07:35 PM
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Sat Jan-23-10 07:38 PM
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Sat Jan-23-10 07:40 PM
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Edited on Sat Jan-23-10 07:40 PM by shadowknows69
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Sat Jan-23-10 08:01 PM
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10. A Lounge-to-GD move? Rare. Well done! |
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