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w8liftinglady Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-01-11 05:35 PM
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proofread my latest editorial on cutting homeless vet funding....
Edited on Tue Mar-01-11 05:38 PM by w8liftinglady
For the usual spelling,punctuation faux pas... thanks as always!

It is March,2011.Tonight,over 138,000 veterans will go to sleep homeless. Thanks to the veteran support of our newly-elected House of Representatives, eleven thousand homeless veterans will lose the glimmer of hope given to them by a "Grateful Nation".

In September 2009, a new cooperative program known as HUD’s Veterans Affairs Supportive Housing Program (HUD-VASH) was initiated. This program combines HUD Housing Choice Voucher rental assistance for homeless veterans with case management and clinical services provided by the Department of Veterans Affairs.

This successful program has removed 75,000 previously -homeless veterans from the streets. This successful program is one of the items on the chopping block to ease our ever-growing debt caused by a decade at war. This is a prime example of how we support our veterans who have suffered the most.

I invite every Daily Light reader to explore their representative's vote on veteran affairs. I think that by now it should be clear who supports veterans after they have served their nation well.

If you are a veteran or veteran family who is looking at possible homelessness,please contact The National Coalition for Homeless Veterans as soon as possible.

The National Coalition for Homeless Veterans is the go-to group to offer advice and assistance.You can research them online at any public library.

http://www.nchv.org/wheretogo.cfm

...or you can call NCHV here:

1-800-838-4357 (1-800-VET-HELP)

Veterans,remember- we do support your service,and we have your back.
Stand strong.
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CTyankee Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-01-11 05:43 PM
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1. A great letter. Very informative. I learned a lot and plan to use it
in my arguments against the righties...esp. if they are veterans themselves...
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TBF Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-01-11 05:45 PM
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2. You need to put spaces after your commas and periods in general,
but that is a mighty fine letter.
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spanone Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-01-11 05:49 PM
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3. great letter
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pacalo Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-01-11 06:04 PM
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4. Outstanding letter! You truly deserve a special award from the VA for all the help
you've given to veterans' issues to make the public aware. You were born to be a nurse, w8!

:yourock:
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PBS Poll-435 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-01-11 06:08 PM
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5. Outstanding, as always
You are a truly gifted writer.

K&R
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Starry Messenger Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-01-11 06:51 PM
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6. k&r
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w8liftinglady Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-01-11 08:14 PM
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7. Thank you all... I'm moving on to TWO local papers,now... the big time!
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PBS Poll-435 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-01-11 08:14 PM
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8. Look forward greatly to seeing more of your work
:yourock:
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