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Coventina

(27,121 posts)
Tue Jan 11, 2022, 06:11 PM Jan 2022

I just received an email from a professional sports organization

trying to sell me season tickets.

Here's the opening:

Hi COVENTINA​,

Hope your doing well, I wanted to reach out to you as here at P*****x R****g we are kicking off the season on March 12th....

and it ends thusly:

J**h W***s
Business Development Account Executive

Um.....shouldn't an "Executive" know the difference between "your" and "you're?"
In any case, in a professional communication, it is considered more proper to avoid contractions entirely.


My daily gripe about the fall of Civilization....



on edit: I corrected two (2) grammatical errors! Oh, how the mighty have fallen!!

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I just received an email from a professional sports organization (Original Post) Coventina Jan 2022 OP
Not a big deal to me. Nt USALiberal Jan 2022 #1
Well, it tells me that person is either sloppy or ignorant. Coventina Jan 2022 #2
I agree with you 100%. BlackSkimmer Jan 2022 #3
Totally agree. LoisB Jan 2022 #6
+1,000 n/t+ malaise Jan 2022 #4
This message was self-deleted by its author malaise Jan 2022 #5
it is disturbing Skittles Jan 2022 #7

Coventina

(27,121 posts)
2. Well, it tells me that person is either sloppy or ignorant.
Tue Jan 11, 2022, 06:16 PM
Jan 2022

It does not reflect well on the organization.

 

BlackSkimmer

(51,308 posts)
3. I agree with you 100%.
Tue Jan 11, 2022, 06:21 PM
Jan 2022

Grammar, punctuation, sentence structure, etc, seem to have fallen by the wayside.

Response to Coventina (Reply #2)

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