Native American Song

[steve folk]

A song I wrote for remembering native americans...would love some feed back...,.I am a poltical songwriter...but suck..


Here is link!!!!

[Tobin S.]

1. You don't suck, Steve, and you shouldn't talk that way about yourself.

I actually got a little chill as I was listening to your song. That means that there is something undeniably good about it.

This line, "But your spirit lives in every human made a slave," is very good. To me in captures the tragedy of every person who works for too little while at the same time implying that they are worth so much more.

Keep writing and keep playing, Steve. I'll keep listening.

Welcome to DU.