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GPV

(72,377 posts)
Sat Jan 1, 2022, 10:12 AM Jan 2022

Need help w/ a watercolor of my bro's house. He majored in art, so of course I'm plagued by a need

for perfection, punctuated by bursts of ill-timed impulsivity. What else does it need to finish? Shadows on lilac bush? Darker lines around windows and door? Start over because it's a scrubbed to death mess?

TIA!



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hlthe2b

(102,237 posts)
2. I like it. No artist here but sometimes the evocative nature of elements is preferable to
Sat Jan 1, 2022, 10:43 AM
Jan 2022

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all the added detailed light or shadows and the former is what I perceive.

femmedem

(8,201 posts)
3. I think it is beautiful as it is.
Sat Jan 1, 2022, 10:48 AM
Jan 2022

If you choose to add anything, yes, maybe some slight darkening under the lilac for a shadow--but not so much that it detracts from your center of interest, the house. But I don't have much experience with watercolor so I don't know if even that slight adjustment would make it feel overworked. Right now, it's not overworked. Don't start over; it's gorgeous. What a great gift.

lark

(23,097 posts)
6. I was thinking maybe a little hazy sun added in the clouds, then more shadows?
Sat Jan 1, 2022, 12:04 PM
Jan 2022

But it is lovely as is.

PatrickforB

(14,572 posts)
7. Gosh, I honestlly don't think it needs much of anything else. It gives me an
Sun Jan 2, 2022, 04:38 AM
Jan 2022

impression of a quiet, happy, rural home. For me, watercolor has always been a really difficult medium, though I have painted some oils. But this is crisp and clean. I can imagine a smell in the house like I remember from my grandparents - of good wholesome cooking. And I can imagine a little porch out back where there are a couple of chairs.

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lunatica

(53,410 posts)
9. Include some of your wonderful ink lines!
Sun Jan 2, 2022, 04:54 PM
Jan 2022

You can never do too much of that or go wrong with it. Your brother will love it.

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