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Coyotl

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2. poor writing

Reply to The Straight Story (Original post)

Wed Feb 26, 2014, 11:43 AM

Feb 2014

"after a Pentagon study found troops reported that incidents of unwanted sexual contact had risen 35% from 2010 to 2012. "

Should be

a Pentagon study found reported incidents of unwanted sexual contact had risen 35% from 2010 to 2012. They don't know anything more than what is reported. Incidents may have gone down or risen even more. The stat is reported incidents, and that needs to be made clear. It is good news IF more are being reported while the number of actual incidents is dropping.

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Army disqualifies 588 soldiers after sexual assault review [View all] The Straight Story Feb 2014 OP

This comes as an explosive Army sexual assault trial is about to get started.... msanthrope Feb 2014 #1

Prosecutors are typically the ones to decide the charges. giftedgirl77 Feb 2014 #5

Not in the military---the command can substantially influence, and until recently overturn msanthrope Feb 2014 #6

They can overturn convictions but they don't decide giftedgirl77 Feb 2014 #8

They can convene a court martial, can't they? Even if the prosecutor declines, a court martial can msanthrope Feb 2014 #9

I'm a paralegal which is the one who drafts the reviews giftedgirl77 Feb 2014 #10

I am an attorney, and I don't doubt your abilities, but McCaskill is correct, right? msanthrope Feb 2014 #12

Right, all we can do as the government is advise them. giftedgirl77 Feb 2014 #14

You should go to law school! I know that you've indicated a disability, but lots of law schools msanthrope Feb 2014 #15

Everyone has pushed me that way & it's my intention giftedgirl77 Feb 2014 #16

If it makes a difference I have a BA in Criminal Justice giftedgirl77 Feb 2014 #11

poor writing Coyotl Feb 2014 #2

Still better: flor-de-jasmim Feb 2014 #3

Well stated. This is why papers have (and need) editors. Coyotl Feb 2014 #4

Indeed.... msanthrope Feb 2014 #7

I hope this gives more impetus to reform when it comes to prosecution of sexual assaults KitSileya Feb 2014 #13