More drivel....

[Tom Yossarian Joad]

I am the Antichrist...

I embrace the Beatitudes.

. (for even you)

I want harm to come to no man.

. (even people of color and different sexual orientation)

I believe in turning the other cheek.

. (before releasing the bombs)

I believe in humility.

. (I am not always right)

I believe in doing unto others as you would have them do unto you.

. (Not "before you do unto me.")

I am an Atheist.

. (I am no threat. We are very unorganized)

I am a Buddhist.

. (I am pacifist)

I am Man.

. (from the same Father)

I am you.

. (I am You)

[Wetzelbill]

1. that's interesting

Short and honest. Nothing like getting to the point. It'd be nice if you added a line from the Beatitudes right after you mention them. Something like:

Blessed are the peacemakers
. (etc)




That's just something I wouldn't mind seeing. Nicely done. :)

[Katherine Brengle]

2. I like this...

When I was reading it, it felt like there was a beat to it, and the voice in my head read the parenthetic lines like echoes...

Nice work.

[Tom Yossarian Joad]

3. Thanks, I couldn't really format it the way I intended here.